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gingertart50 ([info]gingertart50) wrote,
@ 2008-04-29 09:00:00

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Current mood: melancholy

Poetry (with angst warning)
When depressed, I used to attempt to write poetry. Nowadays of course, I read fanfiction.

I know a place where pheasants fly to roost
Over wooded land that never knew the plough.
Where honeysuckle ropes hang green and loose
And bluebells' crisp ripe shoots are springing now.

Where wild roses bloom in tangled mats of thorn
Beneath an ash whose leaf-mould turns to loam.
Among the briars, we cleared the virgin earth
And dug his grave, the day we brought him home.

His burnished coat had faded down to grey
And clouded eyes, that once shone dark and deep.
His time had gone, the spring of life unwound
So we laid him easy down, to his last sleep.

The wind fell still, a moment caught on point,
Though through my tears, I neither saw nor heard.
Perhaps he knew, and understood that grief
Had choked away my final, loving word.

I remembered only that I felt his heart
Beat, then pause, then stop beneath my hand.
His body once quicksilver loose and warm
Laid cold and stiff in the embracing land.

A photograph, a drift of scattered hair,
So little left, the bones beneath the earth.
The hunter caught, ensnared by passing time,
So short the passage runs to death from birth.

So on to other dogs and days I go
But in my wake like sparks of sun on frost,
To light the dark, their many candles glow
Precious memories of those I've loved and lost.



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[info]podpaws
2008-04-29 01:51 pm UTC (link)
I am so sorry. It's hard to let them go even when it's time

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[info]gingertart50
2008-04-29 05:29 pm UTC (link)
Indeed. However long we have them, it is never long enough.

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[info]centaury_squill
2008-04-29 01:56 pm UTC (link)
So sorry, love. *Hugs*

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[info]gingertart50
2008-04-29 05:30 pm UTC (link)
*hugs you back*

That was written for one of my favourite dogs of all time, I still miss him.

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[info]klynie1
2008-04-29 04:26 pm UTC (link)
What a beautiful tribute. I'm so sorry. *hugs*

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[info]gingertart50
2008-04-29 05:31 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. It was written for one of my favourite dogs of all time. I was so lucky to have him for fourteen and a half years.

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[info]lesyeuxverts
2008-04-29 05:26 pm UTC (link)
awww ... *HUGS*

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[info]gingertart50
2008-04-29 05:31 pm UTC (link)
*hugs you back*

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[info]venturous
2008-04-29 06:17 pm UTC (link)
I'll grieve with you. **hugs gingertart and dogz*

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[info]inamac
2008-04-29 06:28 pm UTC (link)
*sniffs* You're in good company. Kipling felt the same way about his dogs - and resorted to poetry too. It helps.

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